• ∟⊔⊤∦∣≶@lemmy.nz
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    16 days ago

    Dam you’ve come a long way since the first comic. It’s looking much better now! Everything is a lot clearer and distinct.

    …I still don’t get the humor but hey, good to see creativity so I’m all for it !

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      16 days ago

      Yeah I agree it really feels like my visuals improved a lot, Kinda crazy to think I’ve come a long way even tho it’s not even been a month of comics, that’s what happens when you take constructive criticism. I think what I need to tackle now is my lack of a singular gag or joke per comic, now it feels more like a collaboration of several jokes in one comic rather than a build-up to a punchline, I think the closest I get is making a gag and then turning that into a build-up for another joke which maybe works IDK I guess it depends on the gags.